Hopeless_shipper's Manga

U won't regret reading this

I've only read five chapters but the story seems rushed, unfurnished and just plain bad.

The lives seem like they're ere made to give her stats with no thoughts behind it. Just to make her op. Ok.

The male lead is the devil and he honestly just seems like an all around bad person. Idk how to explain it but he looks like a pedo file also. Like in her case she had the mind of an adult ok but why is he licking his lips to a child's fear I'm sorry in other circumstances I'd get it but he's just not it. That's the other problem. His sex appeal is just gone. He looks soooo ugly and I'm not sure what exactly to pinpoint. It's overall bad but maybe his eyes? Like his eyeshadow is honestly not doing him any favors. He looks like he's doing drag but unironically.

Men can absolutely rock eyeshadows(Valtor(Winx) and Jared (the laberynth) were my childhood crushes for a reason hello) but this is just done wrong.

Overall bad writing, bad art and bad translation. People that have actually read this all the way over pls tell me how wrong I am. Otherwise so far I'm forced to give this rendition of the story(do translation included) a low 2/5

Thanks for coming to my Ted talk

I got to chapter six and couldn't even finish it she's pissing me off. Like why does she keep doing things in ALL THE WORST WAYS POSSIBLE??

first off, making someone immortal without their permission IS kind of a dick move. Yeah yeah, love and all that. But kind of egotistic none the less.

Then she gets betrayed, and doesn't act on her hurt in any way whatsoever. Fine. I can get that. Not everyone has to fly into a murderous rage, and this is still interesting. And I could even get a god not understanding human plight and therefore not caring for it's subjects. But then don't act all sad and self righteous.

THEN it's her banquet, and not only does she go, she tells him of her plan to kill him at her weakest???? When she's most susceptible to literally ANYTHING?!?!?? TF

DUMB. DUMB AS HELL.


Then she transmigrated into the body of a maid(?) and acts...like that.


Bitch. Your body went back a year, but your mind seems to have resseted back to when you were 12 because if one year ago you was that poised and regal and nice and BLA BLA BLA, why are you acting like that? Like every other "relatable" Shoujo protagonist who "is clumsy with a heart of gold". Bleh

I don't even get why she couldn't have returned to her own body? Why did it have to be another innocents?

Then, instead of making a plan and talking to herself and her magical pets she just goes and does her own thing being dumb af. This was a very easily avoidable thing. Just tell them to run away. What is a starving kingdom going to do against three magical lions and an idiot that commands them?

Just run away with them, and use their connections once they get back to return to your time or whatever.

It's seriously pissing me off how at any fork in the road, when there's an easy sunny path she consecutively chooses the dark, gloomy, haunted shitty one like GIRL!!!