Wait ...why is he helping her?? When our ham dani is so worried? ?
He probably has a plan but I feel betrayed ouch
Ok the writing her is just bad.
Like the characters and the pacing is awful and all over the place
First, he's supposed to have been the emperor for so many years and have been this super smart and dignified guy and they all keep REFERENCING that but they never show it. I have not seen a single moment of the mc being super smart or hardworking. Like they don't show how he's working in the shadows to save his family they just say it.
They also don't show the process of him stepping down and the brother becoming crown prince.
You don't *have to*, but stories usually give a little exposition on slap on the *one year later* label at the very least.here one sec he's talking to his brother and then he's walking down the streets??
The translation also isn't good because it makes it seem like everyone is his brother or smth, and ik English doesn't have those concepts so it's hard but it does make the story even more disjointed.
Anyways. The emperor is supposed to be put together and diligent and seeing him slowly become free would be interesting but it's too sudden and there's no transition. Like the other him seems to be a fever dream. Just a case of Mary sue writing where the author wants to make them this cool amazing person but doesnt know how to do that.
And I sympathisé cause I'm bad at writing smart characters but the story is just either poorly thought out of very poorly transfered to comic.
His death also didn't seem tragic but instead unnecessary cause with the poor writing. Like....if they'd waited just five seconds before killing himself they could have avoided everything?? It's just dumb.
Male lead fucking sucks too. Like I'm sorry but he's so boring and also disjointed asf. Not really cause he's your typical danmei male lead- tall dark handsome brooding blablabla but like ...it just seems so forced??
Luo binghe is a good example of a male lead who is dark and obsessed and acts cute for the mc's love. You can FEEL the affection from him.
This guy has the emotional range of a piece of cardboard even as the mc oohs and aahs at his face.
Their reunion is just fucking bland on both sides. Like the ml shows no emotion despite having basically fought his whole life just to meet him again and the mc has no thoughtd at meeting the protag AND the guy who murdered him?? Bruh
It's like the author took all the tropes out of different danmeis and put them into a randomizer and asked ai to connect the sentences. Except, ai would do a better job at making it understandable even while being soulless! (Fuck ai art tho fr don't think I'm complimenting ai I'm just hating on this) (Tho maybe that was rude sorry I should never compare actual art done by humans with regurgitated trash even if this is also regurgitated trash)
The pacing and characters are just all over the place you don't get a feel for the characters because they're all over the place yet somehow incomprehensible.
I'm not wasting my time on this, but I wanted to vent. So here, my two cents.
Hope you like it.
Ok I'm actually glad this is happening cause hopefully it makes the blond fuck realize how fucking dumb and heartless he is being. You don't fuck with medicine and drugs like that man. Especially with someone who's only "fault" is being a beta??? If u can't love him like he is then you can't love him end of.
Idk if he's just seeing things or recalling stuff or distorting memories bit I'm glad h e blond fuck is gonna suffer the consequences of it, and I'm glad this shows how sinister it is and not just brush it off as uwu cute beta turns omega with some slight side effects nah this is a horror story
LESBIAN LIN CONFIRMATION LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOO
I ALWAYS GOT THE FEELING BUT THOUGHT IT WAS LIKE WHEN AUTHORS ACCIDENTALLY MAKE THEIR SHOUNEN PROTAGS CAUSE THEY DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE WOMEN BUT THIS IS THE REAL DEAL FUCK YEAH!!!!!!
Any bl or gl or anything where the top is the shy uptight one and the bottom is a very happy go lucky person?
This is genuinely so good and breaks so many of my stereotypes.
I usually hate smutty stories but for once I liked it,
I usually hate dumbass characters but he was endearing, and the whole dynamic is just so refreshing. I love it
The gasp I gusp.
I love doomed Yuri though so I'm winning either way
I still want to know how he has that much dating experience. I'm protective over my girl and in all Chinese media the male lead is kinda expected to remain pure for the mc lmao and that's how I usually like it but honestly in that world I don't think she's gonna find anything better crown prince sets the bar fucking low. The meathead is cute but only works with the dommymommy. Otherwise he's a bit insufferable too
I don't get the whole "they should go at their own pace and figure it out themselves" when they HAVE confirmation that the two idiot like each other. Like the bartender should just go and tell her!! So they can avoid all this unnecessary bullshit.
Mannnn Orange is trash but just like mc I keep remembering his younger years
Like ml is fine or whatever but his gifts don't mean much because he's literally rich.
Meanwhile younger orange was dirt poor and STILL chose to give stuff to mc.
Like.
The author is trying to make a paralel of orange regretting it and ml giving her things because he genuinely loves her or whatever but it falls flat because he could buy her a house if he wanted to. He's just doing it slow to not scare her away. But it doesn't reach me because there was no sacrifice.
And ideally you should never sacrifice, but when its to prop up the male lead it feels cheap when it's at the expense of the poor 2ml yk?
BRO WHAT IS THIS AND THESE COMMENTS LMFAOOO
Food porn but... literally?
Bitch inhope the drugs malfunction and turn him into an Alpha instead so his biology makes it you can never be together
Man just reading that first chapter just made me immensely sad I can't explain why. Can you guys spoil it for me?
Is the ml good? I just get the feeling I'd get very angry on the mc's behalf
Y'all pmo off more than she does like she's not particularly interesting as an mc but she is def understandable. Like oh sorry she didn't just forget all the mental torture she went through. Oh "he changed" now? Tough luck.
Bruh "adoptive daughter"? Mm I don't feel good about the female lead being mean to her when she was probably groomed
Like there are laws ppl you can't adopt ppl less than around 16years younger than you ... Ik it's the modern age but still, laws were still a thing back then.
It also just doesn't make sense to marry another woman like?? For what reason
I don't remember well is this the femdom manhwa that was somehow written by a guy??
Y'all I'm looking for a story where the female lead used to have s past love but he "died".
I don't remember if he died for real or not
Y'all any stories like the love story in pirates of the Caribbean??
As in calipso and Davy Jones(the octopus man)
Just, mischievous goddess that is cruel in her honesty and man who tries to hate but is hopelessly devoted despite himself.