this made me upset i won’t lie. what can i say smutty oneshots are rarely good
ehh, all things considered i think its pretty good?? also, the cover is pretty implicit, were you expecting something else??
i just didn’t think it’d be this awful of a read thought everyone was overreacting but nope
99% of the time reading a dj is when I shut off the part of my brain that cares about things like decent writing or non-shit plot-push scenarios. I feel like a lot of people don't a c t u a l l y even "read" these, lol.
you’re right they goon
lol
WHEN THEY FINALLY HAD SEX IT WAS DONE SO RIGHT OH MY GOD IVE NEVER BEEN SO INTO A STORY AND WAITING SO BAD FOR PEOPLE TO HAVE SEX BUT BROTHER THEY MADE LOVE OH LORD
i don’t think my breath has been taken away like this from a sex scene i’ve been blown away i think im losing my mind
Which chapter?
the last one bruh not even kidding
honestly not that bad. i mean it’s a short story so ofc there wouldn’t be much build up and not much of a plot. it’s just a simple story to pass the time! not everything is gonna be a masterpiece but this is still kind of okay. 6/10
don’t understand the hype at all i don’t like kang woojin as a love interest in the first place also a very weird way to end it. not worth the read.
Hey it ended like this because the author was in serious health conditions
sorry to hear that but that doesn’t change my opinion i have empathy for the author but i wouldn’t reread this because it’s too rushed and the plot itself doesn’t make that much sense. tbh it felt rushed from the beginning and lacked some substance. there was no solution to his jinx and woojin wasn’t a good love interest in my opinion. i feel like an extended hiatus would’ve been better, but i admire their ability to push through. however, i still don’t like it
side story 7 was a tough read cause dooshik lowkey SA’d jooha but also not? idk just not the fluff everyone expected. in side story 8 jooha remembers the night they spent together and literally does not care what dooshik did what we deem as wrong. he liked it and even said something like “i’ll be the old jooha for you” and they showered each other in kisses. it was actually really cute and put my mind to rest. in conclusion, everything is probably fine
huh, I only see up to side story 3??
He didn’t “lowkey” SA jooha if jooha said he liked it, I just think jooha was shocked cuz bro was NOT prepared for that
read on different website
well that’s why i said “also not” with a question mark cause he did keep going after he already passed out just trying to capture everything while walking on eggshells
What's the website?
Hopefully not I really like them
so i read until ch 21 and skipped to the end and i hate everything bruh this is so ass. sometimes dark stories involve rape and that doesn’t make the story bad just hard to get through. the ending is so bad because WHY does he crawl back to him i would’ve loved an ending where the mc brutally murders all who wronged him and finds peace in the countryside because what the fuck this is actual stockholm syndrome. dropping this
people mindlessly hating siwon is lowkey getting on my nerves it is NOT that big of a deal he obviously was very hurt when he thought that he was cheated on by the man he loved FOR EIGHT YEARS. he’s not insufferable you’re just sensitive and can’t handle when someone experiences a human emotion for more than 5 minutes. when you’re cheated on you don’t usually dive head in and ask the person “did you actually cheat on me or are you pranking me rn LOLZ”. NO you cut off all ties with them and don’t give them a chance to explain themselves because literally what could they say that could redeem what they’ve done to you. YOU CAUGHT THEM CHEATING so that’s what siwon did! surprise! he was hurt that his lover cheated on him! if you were paying attention you’d notice he didn’t believe it at first even though he could hear him cheating (he wasn’t but you get the point i hope). he blocked him and moved away BECAUSE WHY WOULD YOU WANNA BE NEAR SOMEONE THAT HURT YOU THIS WAY ARE YOU STUPID? when the misunderstanding was cleared up he was in shock and disbelief. why had he believed his wonderful boyfriend would do that to him? he was disappointed and angry with himself so he channeled that anger towards yoonsung for not recognizing him as him upstairs neighbor! he wanted to put off getting back together to fully process the mistake he made. CHAT, let’s PLEASE use our cognitive thinking and have empathy because once you guys actually go outside for once and encounter someone you know in this situation and you respond how you’ve been in the comments then it will not end well for you!!!
fart balls signing off
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Hi? I haven't read this. But may i please know if seme really cheated? And the misunderstanding. Anything related to cheating triggers me so i don't have the guts to read this atm.
Hi? I haven't read this. But may i please know if seme really cheated? And the misunderstanding. Anything related to cheating triggers me so i don't have the guts to read this atm.
he didn’t dw his lover thought he was cause it sounded like it but it was a misunderstanding and if he opened the door he’d see that his lover was very clearly NOT cheating on him
thats the thing, it was 8 years and he knew that the seme really loved him. He couldn’t even given him a chance to explain? Also how could he not fucking connect the dots
that’s the thing, he thought he was cheated on by someone he thought really loved him. he began second guessing everything and didn’t trust him anymore, so why let him explain. it’s not that deep and is very easily explained
oh this was so good this author sometimes misses the mark but this was so good i feel like i could fly