I re-read it for this update and man..so much didn’t really make sense with the given dialogue. I wanted to like it bc I like that the MC speaks up (sometimes) but the drama? between the characters is soooo dumb. Like I was confused about the cousin thing cus homeboy collapsed from heat supposedly they didn’t say anything about hitting his head.
They’re honestly not too likeable yet. The MC is lying about the pregnancy for no real reason to the dad, and isn’t fair when it’s his child too. Yeah, getting married just bc of that is a no-go and I’m glad she said no, but it’s weird how negative and avoidant she is of him. Like he hasn’t done anything to her for her to behave this way?
The redhead seems a little selfish and like she would turn on the MC given the right circumstances.
IDK I am excited to keep reading cus it feels like there’s potential but just as of rn (ch 12) that’s how I’m feeling lol
the chapters where she went and talked with her mom perfectly explained her reluctance to get involved with him tho? Her mom got pregnant and was forced to have a shotgun marriage which led to MC’s miserable situation with her parents, and if she agrees to marry him she is just going down the same path as her mom. She’s a child with a psychological shadow, it’s reasonable she’d keep the father out of the picture and pour all the love she has into the child herself, to compensate for her mother’s lack of love towards her.
yeah he does deserve to know but nobody's perfect, including MC. this is her deep-rooted fear and she's confused, getting involved with the father who likely didn't want this pregnancy to happen either won't help her situation. it's not the nicest thing to do but at least i can understand where she's coming from
wow i love the fl she is such a smart and cunning lady and strong to boot with good instincts. can’t wait to keep reading