don't know why this story in particular is giving me a hard time to rate. The art work and the smut were enjoyable, but the plot felt like it was missing something for me. i guess i didn't see much development aside from them becoming a couple...
i guess spoilery...so when the seme was jealous and getting even more forceful, i thought the uke would fight back a bit more. like maybe im comparing to other stories where there usually is a pause and they both reflect, but things just kept going like nothing. and when what i guess was supposed to be the major turning point was just the yakuza saying hes not with the uke and it was kinda smooth from there on, it felt in a sense empty?
idk, just somehow something in my mind isnt being satisfied so i kinda just blurted what i was thinking here
GAH im probably thinking too much and no one will read this comment and im just going crazy over rating a story T.T ok thanks TT.TT
omg this is exactly what i thought too!!
yay, I'm not alone :')
This is the author’s first work so probably that’s why.
oh didn't know that. kind of excited to see what else they come out with, since this was a pretty good first work
Yes! I agree!!
I see why they ended up with who they ended up with...kinda wished they went back to the original pairing
Still enjoyed (▰˘◡˘▰)