beta
Ok tbh yes it was interesting at first but then it was kind of bleh, like I’m not sure if I was the only one but I really wanted the mc to reunite with his old school friend, I also wanted to see the father and son rls get better or a little more of how they got closer if they did, I also wanted to know how the dad knew to go to the rest area and how he knew they were in that room. Also if he was ever going to get caught writing those stories, in my opinion it was just irrelevant that it was even added to the storyline… :( 3/10
It was overall good the only issue I kind of seen is the fact that the top would get aggressive when jealous and then act oblivious when the bottom would get jealous over a same exact thing he had done before like what? But honestly other than that it was good:) 7/10