Well that was... interesting. I really have no thoughts about the ending except why was it so abrupt. Although I do love the point that he never really fell in love with the blonde guy, it keeps it realistic I guess lol
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Well that was... interesting. I really have no thoughts about the ending except why was it so abrupt. Although I do love the point that he never really fell in love with the blonde guy, it keeps it realistic I guess lol
So the it was a plot INSIDE a plot? My head hurts. Who am I? What am I doing here? WHY AM I DOING THIS TO MYSELF.
They were both mentally unstable I guess they both suit each other, but Law just slightly exceeds Jesse lmao.
Also that ending... not nice. It felt so rushed and short, but I'm kinda glad it is because after all that brain stimulation I don't think I'll be able to handle more
Same I kinda feel like I was beginning to lose my own mind reading this story, I wanted to stop reading it but at the same time I enjoyed the rollercoaster so I just held on til the end. But man i'm kinda glad its over because I feel I might just have went insane myself lol. If the author is reading this, I enjoyed your story very much, please do not be discouraged to make something like this again. :) I will definitely read it (even if I lose my mind while i'm at it hahaha).