Bloody Mary's Manga

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Reading for the ship but the translation and flow of the story is just so bad you never really get what's going on

I really like this one Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ

The perfect cliche plot with all the things you love and well done. I think the FL is a little too dense but she's fine, and the two main characters could use better communication skills (but if they did that we wouldn't get all the drama, extended plot, and annoying 5 years time skip. If they just talked about more, mostly on the emperor's side, things would be very different). I don't like the captain as much as I thought I would but I also hate love triangles so he makes it easy.

I'm glad the blonde prince dude isn't AS awful as he's made out to be

Ch 61. Update: I think the FL should have been given more emotional depth. Kyle was actually thought out more than her when it comes to falling in love. At least we can understand how someone like him is the way he is, but the FL doesn't make any sense. She is a strong knight who is loyal to the emperor... and that's all. Somehow she starts to fall for him, but it makes no sense. There have been plenty of ways the author could have explained her emotional journey to this point but instead she just doesn't have one. She goes from knowing how dangerous he is and leaving him (for YEARS) and even trying to escape whenever she is caught by him, but now she's defending him and saying he's changed (which he hasn't, only the readers understanding of him had changed), ect. She could at least acknowledge what the prince is telling her in this chapter but she fights it like an ignorant dog protecting its master. I wish we got more expalination for how her feelings changed other than she's good at being a protector and she has some dreams where she imagines him as a DIFFERENT person.

Not to mention she reacts just as poorly to the captain being as obvious as possible that he's been obsessed with her this whole time and is willing to do everything for her and her children if she just leaves the emperor like she has always been trying to do.

Ch. 68:
So like when tf did they just kinda agree on having mutual feelings. When did the emperor become someone who would cry and say cheesy things in that situation. The character change for both of the main leads is very sudden and off putting. Felt like there should have been more transitioning for the both of them.....