SoulfulYURI want to read (All 2)
beta
The pacing isn't good. I feel nothing for any of the characters.
The FL being teeny tiny gives me the ick.
Hard to give this a chance when I've met 28384747 characters and had the entirely of a 150 chapter plot smashed into 16 chapters.
You did good Phos, you were better than them.
Sleep well.