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It feels like the author is trying to cram as many typical BL plots into one. It just doesn't seem cohesive to me. And the pacing is non-existent. Now I'm only reading to see how it all ends.
just made a dumbass comment and read this and went like THIS. this is what i was trying to say. but you just said it better and more succint lol thanks
Do they have their own story? Because i would love to see more of them without them being interrupted by Momo.