can someone point out possible improvements in ENNEAD?
ive been thinking about it and nothing comes to mind. the entire comic is well-thought of.
no problems in the art direction, and the pacing, development, and character backgrounds are well done (๑•ㅂ•)و✧,
i need a second opinion cuz i feel like being biased ( ̄∇ ̄")
As an author myself, I'll have to tell yoj the author will not change the story solely bc you're scared of rape scenes.
Each element in a story (this well written) is revelant and should be taken away for no reader in the world.
Plus keep in mind the era of the story to understand the events too, please.
im rereading ennead since chap 50 is up, last challenge and the beginning of the end of season 1 is here.
what did Osiris mean by Isis already got her revenge? im quite loading at the moment(〜 ̄△ ̄)〜 like, she already got back and assured Horus for the throne?
Osiris probably meant they could already consider Isis' revenge as something fulfilled because if Seth left for Duat then, Horus would undoubtly become king. Moreover, Osiris knew Horus had just raped Seth, which he probably thought was the greatest revenge Isis could get against Seth: by having her son "humiliate Seth".
anyone wanna talk about the art or somthin? if so just say it here ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Thanxx a bunch for thiss! I love the art which gives off pleasing sensory effects and i appreciate EVERY good art, esp when u can see those colorful emotions in their eyes... its overwhelming! For me cover photo should be attractive enough to catch my attention. And About this, the cover pic attracted me the most, i literally love the way , LK is looking at Junho with those squinted eyes and smug look, and that slight smirk on his face, with a hint of rough love in it, lol, i loveee it!!! I ignored all the puzzling comments n went straight for it! I mean look at it, u can see the whole story in this cover photo!!
im not trying to be disrespectful, im sorry if it seemed like it. im just pointing out and critiquing it as a reader of this comic. theres always room for improvement on everything (⌒▽⌒)
i didnt mean to be rude to the artist, im just saying, the blue-haired main character and the grey-haired character look quite similar, which can be hard to distinguish from a silhouette. im not saying i can draw any better. im just saying, from a silhouette, its not that clear on who is who between the both of them.
im saying all i said because of some insights an art student said (⌒▽⌒), im not trying to pick on the designs rudely, i dont want to do that. anything that is published on the internet is entitled to be critiqued, including every single comic thats on this website. everyone can say anything that they want as long as it doesn't enter the realm of defamation and so on.
ik it’s incredibly rude to pick on someone’s personal designs without permission or forewarning, but on the other hand these characters are not just theirs. this could potentially get well-known, so it’s the literal job of the producers, etc. to critique and nitpick in order to refine them and make them the best they can possibly be.
its also incredibly important for artists to receive feedback no matter how harsh in order to grow and improve. id like too see this artist grow as well (=・ω・=)
WOAH !Lol For me i wont ever criticize over the art design not even as a reader, cz its totally subjective & im no artist ,tbh ive liked every character design ive ever seen.n i like versatility. People here criticize a lot about art when they dont even have a perspective of it.just cz the art is different from what u like doesnt mean its bad.I read somewhere,it was smthg like :That to understand art(as a whole)u have to be "educated",and education means not science or maths only, but in moral education and ethics as well!"Ig i get it now, how can someone aged 13, 14 or so can know what n how an art should be just cz they read it!! & makes sense how they think that every r*pe art they see is normalizing it n they want it out..its just like once QS said that: do u see a painting n tell the painter that i want it to be like this or that?..smthg like this, right.Lol..idk i might be wrong Ig QS can guide better on everything related.
yeah, i saw QS’ comment on that too. its not about changing the subject of the art, more like, just pointing out where it can be improved, but what some people do is demand that tis subject be change entirely just because it isnt to their personal preference.
to understand the art as a whole, yeah you should get some insight and knowledge as to how to works. saying ‘critique’ with only : “haha, lmao, it sucks” is baseless. you need reason as to what your critique would be.
just clarifying cuz i dont understand, wdym by “how can someone 13, 14 or so can know what and how art should be just cause they read it”?
I hear what you're saying. One thing, the publishers, editors, staff etc don't do a lot of critiqueing and polishing and suggesting. The author's art and writing has to be good enough to be published without help. that's not the editor and publisher's and staf's job. That it is is pretty much a myth
i do hope tho that the artist will get suggestions, polishing, and critiquing from the people around them. im have hopes for this artist to be able pull of changes in the character design JUST for visual clarity. they’re already good at doing anatomy and composition with the gestures, so with just a bit of tweaking and voila, visual clarity ヾ(☆▽☆)
every time i get here, its as if the discussions get longer
the same things have been said over and over and over and over and over and O V E R again, yet some people still do not get it and continue going on about it. how hilarious (≧∀≦)
ikr. its also hilarious to me to see them bickering not about the topic first said but instead insult each other, which makes the comments so long, super petty i say. people have no respect for each other since they hide behind anonymously.
really its sad and hilarious for me to see these people argue over opinions, what is counted and what is not, cant we all just agree to disagree? no need to insult each other like just be the bigger person and step back before you waste your time continuously trying to correct someone who just wont get it.
avoid bickering with someone stubborn because the discussion will NOT go anywhere.
i get that opinions and discussions can get heated, but thats no excuse to get riled up, get mad, and start being mean. i know that even if those are said, you shouldn't let it get to you. not everyone gets that, someone will get personally attacked because that’s just how they are.
seriously tho, just dont be mean, god bless yall
I just want some changes to be made here in this comment section. This manga doesn't deserve the hate, it has so much potential and interesting events coming up. People just have to be a little bit more patient and open minded. They're not reading it as whole and are focusing only on the rape part. Idk it's tiring to see the same comments over and over again, they need to stop doing that. They need to have some kind of a border line to when is enough but they're completely blind soooo yea.... i just want some peace and quiet for a change and funny/happy comments here.
That's also kinda true but idk how are they not tired from hating this lol. Are they really that angry, it's only fiction? When i think about it there are a lot of possibilities. But i guess we have people here who want the same change i want so i'm not alone on this and I'm grateful for that i have someone to back me up on this.
they have the time to hate on this just because it isnt to their liking. i mean if you dont like it, why dont you just make a story to your liking? the thought is quite simple
gosh now im ranting, im just fed up about how these topic threads get so long for the same reasons, sorry to dump this on you :((
thank u very much for uploading here, and giving explanations to the raws, ive been opening the comments here just to see if someone asked a question about the raws and seeing u reply, like the isis and set confrontation, anubis and seth confrontation with set in the cage, the horus rape scene, and the other explanations u have given :))
thank u so so much to the other people who explain what actually was going on in the raws, i would like to be friends with u all :))
may i ask, since im a bit confused:
is the difference in 30/31/32 and 42/43/44, differ A LOT if its either 16+ or 19+?
i hope im not missing out on the storyline if i only read the chaps here on mangago, as to on tappytoon WITH the 16+ and 19+.
i truly wanna see this entire story without leaving out the tiny things, im broke at the moment, but when i can, i really will buy all the chals on tappytoon ;((
and again, thank u to all the people who give explanations to the unknowing viewers :))
thank u for your confirmation ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~
just 30 minutes ago, i purchased the 16+ version of chapter 32, and wow, i am genuinely upset and am much more emotionally invested in ENNEAD, and i already REALLY was when i was reading the explanations of what happened in the raws
what happened in the raws (the rape alone) doesn't delve into the story and feelings as MUCH as the 16+ version, because its a whole different chapter compared to the chapter 16 for the 19+ version, in which WE see, seth only sees osiris in 3 panels, and proceeds to show us how seth is suffering from PTSD and trauma, while hes getting raped by horus
but the in the 16+ version, its shown how seth, seth alone, is FEELING and what he is SEEING during his PTSD, you all should really see what was happening in his head
im really upset for him at the moment still
you guys shouldnt be excited for the rape and whats gonna happen, reading the 16+ version would really change your mind
mojito really is great for portraying all that clearly, the foreshadowing, pacing, and even the art itself, is truly great, too bad u guys arent seeing the 16+ version
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to the people who are yet to understand ENNEAD fully, i really REALLY recommend u just take 15 minutes of your time to watch 30 ads to get 300 FREE points and at LEAST purchase chapter 32 in the 16+ version (●'◡'●)ノ
link for raws pls ;-;
thank you (=・ω・=)