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Chapter 1
Page 16 panel 3
- He's so cute lol. Doing his best to search for the best one for mc XD
Page 23 panel 3
- The way he's leaning into him is so unnecessary that it's gay.
Page 26
- why is he asking about his history with women? To find out whether he can be gay with him?
Page 40
- why is the fucking petals while he's saying that LMFAO. That's so shoujo coded lololol
Chapter 2
Page 18
- Jill had to stop Rizel from doing that cause he was about to Rizz up all the adventurers with how erotic he looked like
Page 19
- That's so unnecessary and gay lololol
Page 22
- Rizzing him up with a headpat? Nice.
Page 23
- "Absolute zero stud"??? That's fucking hilarious Holy shit HAHAHAHAH
Chapter 3
Page 14 panel 2
-how I feel everyday be like lol
Page 18 panel 2
- not the "stud-kun (~w~)
Page 22
-why the fuck is he punctuating every word? Also don't judge the book by it's cover. He's probably the dom in bed
Page 23 panel 1
- Love the way they're teaming up on Jill lololol
Page 26
- Announcing to them all that Jill is his? Damnnn
Page 37
- SO THIS IS LOVE? MHMHMHM-Cinderalla
Chapter 4
Page 19
-Jill why are glaring at him? ARE YOU JELLY?!
Chapter 5
Page 5
-Rizel rizzing up another man lol
Page 16
- Seemed more like flirting to me
Page 22
- Translation: "Don't abandon me pls huhuhu"
Chapter 6
Page 23
-Why is he saying it like he's confessing lmao
Page 31 panel 3
- Translation : "Stop interrupting our date, fucking dammit.
Chapter 7
-no comment cause I'm sleepy
Chapter 8
-still no comment cause I'm still sleepy. Page 28 is pretty gay tho... wait, That's a comment isn't it?
Chapter 9
-not sleepy cause I took a nap yey
Page 29
- This is so romance coded I swear- the way Jill tapped the back of his hand on Rizel's forehead is literally what characters who are so gone for each other do to their partner. Gayyyy
Chapter 10
Page 5
- The only clue that our Rizel was startle is the little jump on his hair lol
-the rest of the pages especially the fight is so gay I don't even need to say it cause it would speak for itself. Ugh Jill and Rizel is my otp fr
Chapter 10.5
Page 9
-he for sure wanted to do that too. Without anyone else to see tho
-the novel's cute af. What a smart wolf Shirley is <3
Chapter 11
- King-sama I gay for Rizel for real. He's being naruto for his Rizel lol. Gay gay gayyy
Chapter 12
Page 21
- OMG. THAT LINE EISNWIMEIWKWKW. ITS SO ROMANCE CODED. HOW DOES PEOPLE STILL THINK THEYRE STRAIGHT?!
Chapter 13
Page 10 panel 7
- yeah cause he fell for Rizel<3
Page 22
- lmao threesome cuddling?
Page 24
-love how they're both teasing him XD
Chapter 14
Page 9- Judge is so cute lol. A big puppy indeed
Page 21 panel 4
-Wtf Jill? The hell are you planning if Rizel said yes lmao
Chapter 15
-No comment cause I dunno
Chapter 16
Page 4
-not Rizel rizzing the man up so much that he gave him probable double the amount lol
Chapter 17
Page 34
- Nah you just awakened your inner masochist
Chapter 18
Page 24
- Kinky
Chapter 22
Page 34
- Gay snake lol
Chapter 23
Page 16
- lol gay
I forgot to write my thoughts for the other chapters cause I liked it so much lol. Also if y'all noticed I kept calling Lizel, Rizel.This is because In the first couple chapters that's what they said his name was and then I liked it better cause Lizel has so much rizz it makes sense to call him Rizel(no? OK...;( )
On another note, I wonder how this story would end. Especially when Lizel would need to go back to his world. I bet the others won't stand it and be super sad or want to go with them. Maybe he'll take Jill- ughhhh I hope they wouldn't all need to separateee.