Lets talk about the manhwa jinx, if you were able to create the future chapters of jinx, how would it be?
It's the funniest webtoon here since yall hate it but fill the feed section when it updates. It's funny how yall can hate something while getting obsessed with it. I stopped reading after chapter one because I could smell the cliché that was about to come, so here I am not worrying about it :P LESSON LEARNED:Let us not force ourselves to read anything that isn't our cup of tea. #NO_TO_BANDWAGON.
I'd love it if dan grows some balls. If I'm going to write it, I'll make dan slowly realize that he deserves better and wake up from his fantasy just like the uke in speak of the devil. I would write it in a way that dan, despite having feelings for that horse, will slowly try to stand in his own feet and will be aware of how him having feelings for that horse won't make his life better. If that horse won't let him go because of his debt, he will continue to work for him but will look for other ways where he can earn money to pay his debt and eventually making sure that he doesn't own no shit to him and leave him.
However, if that horse let him go and won't make him work for him anymore, I will write dan as a person who is hurt because whether we like it or not, he have feelings for that horse, and the reality is, we get hurt if we like someone. But, despite being hurt, he will be more focus on earning money to pay for his debt and also for his grandmother that he will eventually forget about him hurting for that horse.
In any of the two scenario, I will continue it where I will write dan as someone who have difficulty adjusting his life, but despite that he will try to focus on himself. I will also make him busy with his life making the ends meet, he will feel tired everytime he finish his shift or work but at the end of the day, he will be thankful and happy that even though he's tired af, he's earning money in a legal or normal way. I will also put a scene where when he comes home, he will put his bag down, lie in bed because he's tired af, and as his eyelids drooped, heavy with weariness he slowly fall asleep with a smile on his face.
I will also make him try to meet other people, possibly co-workers, and socialize a bit wherein he will have a hard time socializng and will also have difficulty trusting people. To make it a bit unrealistic, he will meet people who will become good friends and a support system which will make him realize that there are a lot of good people in the world.
I would really love to write it where he doesn't end up with that horse but if he does, I will make it where that horse will first realize his mistake, his feelings, Dan's absence and how lucky he is that he met Dan. His first step will be to ask for forgivness. (which at this point is so hard to imagine) Ofcourse dan, with a better mental health will be the better person, so first he will say thank you for his help, with his grandma's bill and the debt collector, but will, DEFINITELY NOT FORGIVE HIM for hurting his feelings and for how he treated him. He will tell that horse that he doesn't need him in his life and he's doing well and better without him in his life.
Before all this, I will make sure to write a scene where that horse gets beaten up despite doing the deed for his jinx. I will also write that horse as someone who will try to become human. First he will start treating those people around him well because, everytime he tries to be a jerk that he is to people, he will feel like he is hurting Dan instead. He will also see a scene where Dan looks so happy mingling with other people and regret how he can't see Dan smile to him again. He will try to look for ways on How he can be of help to Dan so that Dan will like him again but eventually realizing that Dan really don't need his help and that He have no place in Dan's life anymore. Now what he will do is to make their relationship improve. First for Dan to atleast treat him as an acquaintance, then to become friends, and He will do his best so that Dan can like him back again. He will become the biggest simp and Dan will become a "i don't take shit sitting uke."
But before all that, There will be a lot of self reflection, regret, suffering and pain, sleepless night for him, crying and also begging. I will also love a scene where he gets drunk, bawl his eyes out, beg on his knees to Dan, ask for forgiveness again and confess his feelings to him.
In the end, there will be a lot of Consensual sex where He, now promoted as a human, will put Dan's needs first, may it be in the bed and in everyday life. I will write a scene where when he wakes up and saw Dan sleeping beside him, He will be teary-eyed and thankful for that moment, and will kiss either Dan's forehead, his wrist or his hand.
His personality totally turns 360 so I would like to write him as someone who is still horny tho, good in bed and there will be a costume scene, where he will request dan to wear a sexy lingerie, or a nurse, or a maid costume, or it can also be a cat with a tail, but dan will also tell him to wear a cat headband and make him wear a handcuff. (might be hard to imagine but who cares)
I guess that's all I can think of right now.
Ps. I don't know why I'm so serious about this lmao. I put my heart into this tho.
You really did put heart into this. I like the way you write, and honestly, fuck that jaek. I hope he rots single. Dan should have listen to Jaeks ”ex” I hope he finally realized from chapter 45 that jaek really is a piece of shit and only thinks about ”winning”. I hate the fact that the author gonna put a ”traumatic” backstory on jaek and everyone will be weak for him. But i know that i wont and I hope he doesnt end up with jaek lol.
Ok tbh like even at this point I'd just make dan realise all the shit that he's been blind towards until now and then he decides to speak up for that debt being over, then when jk goes on with his bs I'd make him just leave his house & go out & somehow heeseung & potato get to know abt all the shit contract cuz dan finding another job won't be real sin e his grandma's bills are too much & then dan gets some sense & accepts heeseung's money help & leaves jk while heeseung threatens jk yo get his head straight or he'll tell the world about this f up shit. Then ofc being the dogshit he is won't take it srsly but stops bothering dan and dan neber contacts him too cuz he's got human logic now & then time goes on & I'll show jk going through ebery horrible thing u can imagine of, he'll also beg & cry on his knees & all that but dan will just ignore that horseshit bc he gives no fucks and tries to live a normal life while getting over his stockholm syndrome. Then the story is just jk's mental health declining & dan living a normal life with his friends then at the end I'll hit him having a healthy partner. End of story.
Alright tbh the og ver i had in my mind for months was different & this isn't one isn't as satisfying but yeah a lil overview
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