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The more I read, the more I think the author is projecting and needs to get professional help to deal with some trauma or fear, maybe depression. Some of the lines are so out of story and topic. It doesn't make sense and it's not relatable.
Also I don't understand what's going on, are you trying to say everybody should just study and work and not engage in love bc it could get difficult? Everybody is lonely now when they had so much potential to make each other happy with little effort. The most difficult time was over so now when there is not much left to get to a happy relationship, they just give up. WOW.