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The only "issue" I have reading this is Uke's appearance. He definitely looks a little bit like a minor. Fortunately he isn't (▰˘◡˘▰)!
BUT, yeah, he looks way too young and too cute in a good but concerning way in my objective point of view (if only author made him looks a little bit more "adult"-like?) I don't know how to explain it... maybe the chibis in between the steamy scene didn't help much (?)┗( T﹏T )┛
Well, wherever ╮(￣▽￣")╭ ...
So far I like that they both want it because felt attracted to eachother. Uke seems to be innocent but not naive fortunately ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ Let's see what will happen next!
Seme is definitely my type, I would look for a dom like him ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
Thanx ♡♡♡♡