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The plot isn't plotting quite gracefully for me, for now...
It's easy to understand what happens but it continues to feel like it's very messy ╥﹏╥... (hope it gets better later on)
I think the intimate affairs are expressed a little too often(￣∇￣")
but of course sometimes it looks very hot!
It just lacks a little bit more of balance between the main characters relationship development, their actual issues and the sudden introduction of new characters that are secondary but have noticiable impact already ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Maybe I'm just too absorbed about connecting everything objectively and logically that I forget that it ain't that "serious", yet I really think the plot lacks depth, crutial dialogues, innerthoughts, or everyday significant events (?)...
I actually don't know where to point out the issue. Maybe I'm just getting bored of the main couple, maybe, just maybe, I want to know more about the scar-faced bodyguard relationship development with the secretary? or with long hair dude?? ... this is actually what really gets me hooked, I'm very curious of the secondary couple ╮(☆▽☆)╭
Let's see what will happen from now on! (=・ω・=)
Thanx ♡♡♡♡