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what sucks about stories like this is wasted potential. this story had the potential to be incredibly interesting because the characters are actually… not inherently boring!
the plot is a little recycled but it’s still very enjoyable. but the story progression and writing just… make no sense! there are so many plot holes and sometimes the characters are so inconsistent.
idk, maybe it’s an error because of the translation, but i feel like this makes me so upset simply because the premise is good. and it’s wasted here.