
I didn’t read the story yet but I always read the comments first to get a general idea and I must say, as much as this is fiction and is in no case a real person’s story, you shouldn’t tweak your morals to justify it. There’s a fine line between fiction and reality in a readers mind, that’s why the more you read stories about rape, the more desensitized you become. And the more you try to understand a psycho character, the more of a psycho you become : “The more you gaze into the abyss, the more the abyss gazes into you”. You don’t have to stop reading, if you enjoyed the story good, if you didn’t good still. Just DON’T justify what’s happening in it.

Wtf are you on , you have to pay attention to what I wrote. “It is fine to keep reading but just DON’T try to justify it”. If I’m not wrong you are the one who was trying to justify pedophilia with legal consent age right ? THAT is what you I’m trying to warn about cause next thing you know you’re gonna tell a real 16 year old it’s fine if you screw with your 32 year old literature teacher.

I can’t even argue cause that’s another category on its own he killed his father with a smile and is talking about « for you ». You got lines with pedophilia, this is bad and this is good, where do you begin with that type of plot. Even massacre could be defendable
Idk why this one blocked me but oh well

Honestly this was so beautiful everything about this was amazing and I just know this story must have been someone’s story, could have been someone else’s story if it didn’t end tragically, and it breaks my heart how even though they are together you can’t call it a happy ending cause it’s just one sacrificing freedom for love ☹, still they are together and it just makes it all the more special.

The story is quite inconsistent and a bit all over the place to be honest. Like the author is just randomly getting ideas and implementing them into the story without real story line. A few examples of what I’m saying among a lot other :
- The queen bee issues (the second one) has been intoroduced around chapter 80 but 50 chapters later still no solution, just random talks, other introduced issues (with also no solution), and it’s just circling around (same issues for the beauty berry and the growth elixir who are older problems)
- The chilly (that was my last straw to be fr) that are randomly generated, at some point he didn’t have any left (plant and seed) then 20 chapters later he’s taking care of the new plant (I just considered that the fruit was taken and that it needed time to produce them again, for my sanity) and then now, 30 chapters later, somehow, the chilly he didn’t harvest have gone missing (where ? They walked ?) and he doesn’t have anything left. He harvested ONCE, but is seen toking care of it thrice and somehow he doesn’t have any more left
Not even gonna talk of that farm land that has been empty for 119 chapters straight but somehow he doesn’t have anything to plant . He’s just gathering people around, lying his ass off for no reason, while running left and right. This guy is the epitome of being busy without doing anything at all, I should learn to do that at work
Guess this is the equivalent of those Wattpad drops. When the author suddenly lost inspiration and motivation half way true and you’re already invested