I liked it but I think the main issue with the writing and "rushed" ending is that the villains are just too dumb. The plot really can be spelled as people going: "Hey, don't mess with Grace, she's kinda crazy" and the villains going: "I'm gonna do that anyway"
[spoiler] Like the big plot was framing quite literally the MOST loyal house to the crown for DECADES because... *checks notes* the obvious villains weren't there... like huh??? So them having an alibi is good and dandy, by why not check if the least likely suspect and least likely to gain from killing royalty also has an alibi
Immature ass father, stupid ass sister (like literally what was her angle), dumb ass rival house, greedy ass younger princess
Very refreshing to see a FL that clocks shit and IMMEDIATELY addresses it. So many would have just stewed in the misunderstanding and act passive aggressive until an awkward conversation comes around. Girl immediately expressed her feels like don't fucking do that to me.
I'm sad there's not more. Love when neither partner is a super twink or super buff. Average guys with average builds. But god MC is so hot to me man and MC is so cute when confessing. Like sure stalking is bad but this is a lighthearted fictional BL who really GAF
I want to red the story but i can't with the art the way the skin blends into the hair makes everyone look like a lightbulb. And mMC'sface is bigger than his head. Everyone's face is so.... Interesting (Matty pretty hot tho)
I thought him being a school teacher would be a bigger part of his character outside of liking kids. But damn he's still unemployed like dawg, get a job
I liked it but I think the main issue with the writing and "rushed" ending is that the villains are just too dumb.
The plot really can be spelled as people going: "Hey, don't mess with Grace, she's kinda crazy" and the villains going: "I'm gonna do that anyway"
[spoiler]
Like the big plot was framing quite literally the MOST loyal house to the crown for DECADES because... *checks notes* the obvious villains weren't there... like huh??? So them having an alibi is good and dandy, by why not check if the least likely suspect and least likely to gain from killing royalty also has an alibi
Immature ass father, stupid ass sister (like literally what was her angle), dumb ass rival house, greedy ass younger princess