These comments have me in tearsssssss! Why are ya like this?!
Idk, I feel like something about the structure of the story could be written better. Like the art is good. MC back story is decent...and why we are in this current situation is alrigh. But I always feel like there are pieces in-between of how we got to one point to another is missing. Like the chapters are chopped and pieces are missing. Idk. I still like the story tho, the ML is a cutie. I hope he can convince the MC to want to keep living.
Nothing hurts a man more than when he offers you loads of money etc...and you tell him you don't need it or him.
It cracks me up when they be having Leo's lil but out when they're having fairly normal conversations. Lol
I don't even want to start reading this again. Because the author always makes the wrong choice with these plots and the red flag always wins.οΌοΏ£γΈοΏ£οΌ
I swear I done read up to this point 50/11 times. Does anyone know where else this is uploaded.
Ppl think Jo is boring because he has normal dreams and aspirations with a normal family and life....is crazy to me. So I guess needing trauma and falling into a life of crime, drugs and murder is the fun stuff. Ppl are mentally unbalanced. From how I see it Ian needs the life Jo has. To want him to be in a relationship with TJ that's built on trauma and shacked with guilt..... that's diabolical.
Awwww my tan babies.....so cute. Glad that raping bastard's time was cut short.
Burn this bullshit...CUZ WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK!!!!! Who authorized these two chapters because it doesn't make sense. Where does it make sense sis?!?!?!! Hello is anyone in the rooooooom!?! Like why are you for real playing right now, author. I want to file a fucking complaint and talk to the damn manager, at this point.
Melt me into the desert and let me die of happiness. (β§ββ¦) I need this type of love in my life. The endless support and willingness is unmatched. Bravo! Bravo!
Wtf you mean he had no place to go...I mean maybe like his apartment?! I hope they actually talk TALK, next chapter. And not just some bs to get in the mood to fuck. They shouldn't even be kissing honestly.
That old bastard thought..... Not over here boo. Keep it pushing.
Finally with these two...you know. Thought it would never come. And since this is happening the end is very near. The Step brother will definitely team up with the ML AND hopefully leave with the bodyguard when it's all over. This place isn't healthy for him.
I think the mistress is gonna have her father pay a visit to the FL. Because besides her, they are the only two who know the dukes true nature. And will believe that Raymond was the one who tried to kill the king.
Has any one read the raws, does his ever get back to his sibling? I'm worried something happened to the poor baby.
Ohhhhh, I hope he puts her in her place real quick. Cuz mind your business. Cuz what's it to you, sit doesn't effect your life, so why are you worried about it.
Also when the officials come out, pls keep uploading... because I really don't want to wait until they are at the chapters we already read. Ya just do both...plsssss!
Damn....story never lets up. It has it's foot on my throat from chapter to chapter.
This MF has no fucking resolve. He always piggy backs on what he says he will do and ignores the signs of needing space to obtain a clear mind to think properly. It pisses me off how weak minded and hearted he can be. I'm not saying be a cold hearted mf, but stand on your word. He lets everyone else influence how he acts and what he thinks but himself.
I swear in these stories they never have a solid friend to tell them that what they're doing or how they are acting is dumb and they need to get their shit together.
Love the subtle adoring names the MC calls the ML. He's doing it without knowing how he's changing him, softening and healing up his cold heart.
