beta
The characters and storyline were interesting... BUT, somehow the author managed to write the dramatic events in the most underwhelming way... like the trajedy that happened in the acadamy, their long lasting separation for over 10 years, their reunion, the final revenge thing. All these events felt skipped and didn't stick to me (￣∇￣") as a reader i should feel the impacts of the things that push through the plot line.
Also... i think it could have shown better how they fell so deep in love together in the first place.
Lastly, the whole not being able to escape a cave for 10 years, and rigon not being caught when he was literally in the enemy's turf most of the time seemed so unrealistic and over the top.
The better examples of plot delivering in this genre would be painter behind the curtain, mo dao zu shi, and King's maker.