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We're hit in the face with fluff for the first 10 chapters. Just as I got settled into a historical fluff piece, the story changes into a political one? And then suddenly all strategic decisions are placed in MC's hands? What?! Our MC is a literal newbie! An educated newbie, but a newbie--something the story even reinforced earlier! I'll admit that our MC has potential to be more--but it's too much too soon. Apparently it's only 34 chapters, so why was there so much mindless fluff for the first 10 chapters...?