beta
At first I was loving this story. Couldn’t put it down, really enjoying the characters, and was so happy with what I thought the dynamic between the characters was. But all of a sudden the author decides to flip a switch and shit on this story by making the love interest a huge as possessive manipulator and the mc a dumbass pushover. And then on top of that makes the two characters start acting fucking stupid, for what? So they can “ show their true selves” and love each other more deeply because of it. Shut the fuck up. It felt so random and so unnecessary and it just ruined a story that I thought I was really gonna like so now I’m extra pissed. Also fuck “dubious consent” that was non consensual. With that being said i’m going to be gone for a few days to recover my peace of mind, stay sane out here guys
guess im not reading this for now. Ty random pissed off reader HAHA
omg noooo i was so excited to catch up on this one since its done
Cool premise, but rushed and a bit chaotic at times (plot points were mentioned for a second and then no explanation given or not brought up again). Also, suspending disbelief (but most likely done for the plot) that a zombie outbreak was quickly contained in such a small area. The whole time I kept thinking “why do all the characters think the military are coming to save them” or ”do they really believe that the rest of the world outside the university isn’t also in chaos/ overran by zombies?”. Guess I was in the wrong this time. Anyway, wish the romance had a bit more substance. The story needed more time to focus on it building to feel more real and have that special ommf.