mmm... i can't say i like it. it's obviously inspired by "sayonara alpha" but has missed the point. honestly this story is wrong on so many levels, and especially on the part that everyone kept saying that it's weird that they aren't lovers. bruh HE RAISED HIM wtf are you talking about? and nio's attitude does not stick with me, like his actions don't much his thoughts. and i already can see the "well it's fiction, why you care?" comment and I'm going to say just because it's fiction doesn't mean it's beyond criticism.
"do it for the future" stfu bitch if it's a child you want just do an our of body insemination and that's it. also wtf is it me or one page is missing? like how they ended up trapped? there's a whole as transition missing.
*me enjoying myself* man~ how nice communication is~ he just went there, told him what's up without any "omg what if he gets mad?!?" bs. now lets see some fighting (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
that awkward moment when you realize after years that rihito didn't even hit puberty when he started the relationship with sensei...yikes! and actually i liked that story the first and second time reading it but now it just feels very messed up... *sigh*
just end it there. JUST END IT THERE! WE DON'T NEED THE RIVAL TROPE, THERE'S NO USE FOR IT ANYWAYS! THEY ARE IN A HAPPY RELATIONSHIP THAT ACTUALLY HAS COMMUNICATION, WHAT ARE YOU GONNA GAIN WITH A RIVAL?! UGH!
mmm... i can't say i like it. it's obviously inspired by "sayonara alpha" but has missed the point.
honestly this story is wrong on so many levels, and especially on the part that everyone kept saying that it's weird that they aren't lovers. bruh HE RAISED HIM wtf are you talking about? and nio's attitude does not stick with me, like his actions don't much his thoughts.
and i already can see the "well it's fiction, why you care?" comment and I'm going to say just because it's fiction doesn't mean it's beyond criticism.