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Pacing was quicker than pikachu that the story didnt make sense. Everything was so dumb.
The murder was dumb. The attempt to help an orphaned child was dumb. The 12 yrs of so called abuse and control of the antagonist was dumb. The story how their love cam to be was dumb. The fire accident is the dumbest and the ending is dumb. I know it was just 6 chapters.. but really?
Murder. U plan to murder just the husbad.. u take care of the child.. u are the manager of the house.. but u didnt know the wife was gonna be on the carriage too?? Like really?????????
Reaching out to help the new orphaned child.. really?? U expect handing a letter to the maid one rainy evening and continously sending letters would help? Really???? Not attempting to meet w the child in person, directly or indirectly? Really?
12 yrs of abuse and crontrol.. really?? U become a grwon ass man now and ur aware ur the heir to the house but u'd still let an old man walk over u. Really?? Ur fed, ur dressed, ur not made to work in the stables, ur not sent to die on the war, u sleep in ur own private room, comfortable on a bed, really???? U didnt do any rebelling in that circumstance and u had the address to the letter the whole 12 fvcking yrs.. u didnt even try to escape earlier.. really?? Even using the same coachman to go to the address ur escaping too.. really?? Ur just dying to be found out quickly as a pokemon no? (︶︿︶)＝凸
Ur love story.. really? I dont even wanna start talking about it! Its making me maaaaaaad! The fire accident is even more ridiculous! U confront the killer just like that! The mansion was burned in half.. u were im the middle of the accident. U passed out. The old bottom guy came late! But u really didnt get any bit of scratch on u? No burn, no wound, no bandage, no nothing??? And u fvck right afteeeeerrrr?? Oh my fvcking lord! Wtf???
Of course im gonna write a long ass review about it coz if im gonna waste my time.. im gonna waste it even more to talk shit about it anyway. Left help vote for 1 star pls. The 1 star is for the artist at least. Jesus fvcking christ (╯°Д °)╯╧╧