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Okaaayyyyyy~
Finally done with the chapters available.. that was some bat shit crazy stuff.. in lotsa ways fersher.
I kinda dont like a few things here that might have been done a little better.. but i also have some good takeaways.
The doctor would deffinitely feel something eventually for his "patient" because OF COURSE, their sessions were never normal. MJ was his stalker, a criminal that claims to want some "treatment" but fr, he also wanna get close and get freaky with the doc he's been crushing on for years. MJ initially sort off kidnapped him to some shack deep in the woods too and thats when their first real "treatment session" began.. where doc got some really hands on sexual harrassment lol totes different from when he was sexually harrassed within the safety of his clinic by his other patients btw.. so yea.. eyes got forcefully opened to his dormant preferrence, sure.
*point is.. a different and dangerous situation/environment like that would definitely cause something else compared to when a professional meets his patient inside his clinic or the hospital..where he's safe and comfortable.. so yea.. Doc would deff start too "feel" something for MJ, wether thats fear, anxiery, pity or a combination of that. Top it off by the doc's occupational disease of "patients first" slogan.
It didnt help that Doc soon got kidnapped again by the deranged detective, almost killed, saw murder, drove over the rails and almost died.. AND got saved by MJ right on time. Talk about nursing him at home while coming onto him VERY strong kekeke MJ didnt waste time and opportunity there. So yea.. of course doc would grow dependency on MJ.. whose kind, protective and loving ONLY to him. Eventually leading to sex, which doc didnt have since he got divorced lmao. There u have it folks.. thats the formula of their love.
Im not saying thier match up was bad.. im just saying its very obvious.. and to even add all that danger just to bring them together seems so forced.. but its not bad ig.. while reading.. i just thought.. yea.. of course that would happen.. i dunno, i just found it really obvious and bland. I like the mystery part tho.. like father and crack and their pasts.. but its also kinda losing spark now because its become easy to predict.. like the first few chapters till the middle, it was still exciting.. but after i saw crack.. meh. I kinda figured some stuff out already
I also find it very funny and painful when doc was kidnapped by crack and did that whole party and a gang rape was supposed to happen. Adam was mentioned.. quite a few times, but the druggie wasnt even significant HAHAHAHAHA i thought he'd at least be someone like Ice.. another sidekick w a role.. but nah. He's just a mob but it didnt quite seem so coz they were building him up and was mentioning him on the convo.. i was a bit disappointed. Also the cake! Hahahaha what was that for? I was confused what the cake was gonna be.. turns out it was supposed to be for father but father wasnt even gonna be present in that party, doc dont even be affected by seeing that.. MJ was just kicking it coz it just added om his fury.. like? There was no symbolism but there was a highlight? Whats the point? crack was just high asking for that? Hahahahaha
Also, really? The agent invited Ice to the party and crack said Ice was a traitor.. but really? U guys wont expect MJ to come and break in? Fr? HAHAHAHA of course he'd come. Ice would fvcking let him knowwww that was dumb! If yall were planning to break doc and get info, u wont be hosting that party bruh. U would kidnap him, yes, u would scare him, yes, u would try the gang bang to break him, yes.. but cmon.. There was no point for mentioning Adam and his wine drug, ordering a 3 layer cake and inviting Ice hahahahaha that was pointless.
Top it off with being springkled with gas or tin or whatever that was.. (〜￣△￣)〜 bruh.. the moment u light fire.. in a basement.. no windows.. springkled with gasoline/tin.. and with many flamable furnitures.. bruh the whole place would literally burst into flames. It wouldnt burn people like that, one by one.. it would literally and instantly swallow that whole place with fire.. no one left alive. All burnt and dead. But yea.. apparently MJ can do something else. Lmao i dunno, everything about that arc was so stupid it was hilarious and painful. Maybe because that was a druggie party, so maybe it was meant to be like that lmao. Everybody high. Sense no sense lmao.
Anyways~ im done with that.. time for some prophecy ans big brain thoughts lmao.
So i kinda figured some stuff when Crack was introduced. Maybe im wrong.. but im pretty sure im right HAHAHAHAHA
So Crack, was an actor. Wow. A very famous one at that. Pretty awful character to chose as a drug lord.. but whatever. So he was a survivor of a trial treatment doc had before and father is his cousin. The treatment was a failure and crack continued with his life as a crazy mf.. so yea. Im pretty sure he messed with his cousin. The very same cousin that survived a kidnapping and a hunting game lmao. Do u get it now?
When crack realized something's wrong with his cousin coz the kid is wierd.. reading an acedemic book but looking for disturbing words and giggling to himself. Yea.. the kid is batshit wierd.. crack prolly talked about doc to his cousin same with how he talked about his wierd cousin to doc on their treatment sessions.. so crack basically introduced doc to father and doc indirectly.. like he did with MJ. Crack is the root cause of this whole shit u guys lol. Father became obsessed with doc the same way MJ is but they just dealt with it differently. Father dont wanna get treated, but MJ does. So MJ got to doc first.. even tho father had closer access to doc all this time.
Yea.. father is that Dr.Jin hahaha i just know he is. Father is the type that would playmind games and let other people do his bidding.. and bcoz the fvcker is so smart.. of course he would slowly but surely penetrate doc's inner circle first. Thats what top tier psycho do. Father became a doctor too, and got close with the director so he could get legal access to doc and even work in the same clinic lmao. Im pretty sure it was father that introduced that whole "hunting game" to crack and the gang too. If crack was let alone, he'd still be a druggie for sure, maybe become a drug pusher or a drug lord to.. but far from hunting people for entertainment. Nah. Father however, experienced first hand what that "hunting game" is coz he was a victim.. so he prolly brainwashed crack to do the killing and crack became who he is.
Pretty sure father broke crack so bad, prolly using blackmailing and stuff thats why crack is so scared of father, even tho crack is the one managing the people. Thats why father is such a scary psycho. Maybe father and crack started their "hunting club" w a few people but eventually got so big because now they dealt with drugs, it made them rich.. these drugs got them connections.. maybe to politics and the government.. so now they had power.. with money and power, they can cover up so many crimes.. killing people became easy.
I think crack dont wanna do the killings anymore.. just do drug business like MJ instead.. so he wants to off father but got offed by MJ instead coz he dumb. Im thinking the rest of this story will focus on schemes and mind battles between doc and father.. i dont think father wants to do something sexual w doc like MJ.. but he wants to break doc.. i think the type of obssession father has is something platonic.. like he prolly admires doc's brains or something.. and see what doc would be like being broken and stuff.. im thinking father caused that incident with doc's sis in law so doc would divorce his wife too..
Anyways, im thinking its gonna be mind games this time.. and of course, father would be caught eventually.. MJ would also prolly be caught but because he was seeking treatment, his sentence would be lowered and he'd eventually be free and live happily ever after with doc. That.. or if this is gonna turn into tragedy, father would be killed by MJ, and MJ and doc would be mental patients.. or MJ would also die with father and doc becomes the mental patient.. i dont see MJ and doc dying for some reason.. maybe father or MJ and father.. i think doc would deff live. I dont think this author would try killing off his characters. There's also another ending where MJ and father dies and doc would get together w his wife and kid.. but i doubt.. that would make everybody hate it because BL was already a big component here.
Anyway, thats it for me and my prophecy. I know its so long.. but if u read it all.. thank u. Hahahaha i just enjoyed it so far.. so many dumb moments.. but its bearable. Lets see if i got things right lol