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This was unexpectedly short and it was really good i would like to read more but thinking more about it, I guess it was right that they ended it there. I think this is a fairly good ending. The sect was already established and has grown significantly in influence, wealth in business and people connection. The members are also significantly stronger now after all those trainings. Although his personal adventure would be an awesome read too.. i realized there was no concrete villian created to continue the story. The MC died of natural causes so revenge after his reincarnation could not be part of the plot.. the Demonic sect wasnt making any scheme to take over the world yet, so they couldnt be an enemy they had to fight. Basically, there was no major conflict happening in the plot and if the story continued, he might just have to fight bandits and corrupt people but thats really it. If ut had dragged on.. we might soon complain that the story has become a repeating cycle.. so I guess this ending is fine too.. but yea.. i wanted more T.T