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Is it just me or does this seem to have been written by a child/teenager (⊙…⊙ ), not trying to be offensive especially if it's not true but that was the thought that popped in my head while reading. I couldn't get into this at all and the wording was like elementary basic. Again I'm not trying to offend I'm just trying to gauge if anyone else felt similar. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍