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perkystar created a topic of Age of arrogance

The story's premise in the beginning was superb, but the delivery is somewhat rocky, almost flat.

The Author uses ALL the PLOT ARMOUR to protect her leads cause this thing ain't it.

If Prince Carlisle ever gets the throne just know it is plot armour no real strategy.

Even the "2ML" IS NOT EVEN a threat or an option if we think about it. There is no real strategic thinking or planning from the Author to show the intelligence of her characters JUST PLOT ARMOR.

NB...I think the FL should have had her hair cut short if she was such a badass character that went to see the emperor in her dirty battle suit in episode 1. Such a person will NEVER have the time to maintain such long silky flowy hair with a side braid... just saying..