hello jello's Manga

3
this is reallllyyy bad despite such gorgeous art.
a child with an unknown powerful constellation backing her up? (why)
what happened since 3rd grade-middle school.
what are servers? why is she lazy? just bc she could be? that's nice but not super interesting as a mc.

63
it's pretty good. the world building and characters are interesting.

60

48
not bad, the world building and plot is pretty good. the characters could use more development.
rather than constant action, some moments of them talking, joking, arguing, would make this more interesting.
WHY is the plot going so fast. sooooo much happened in a couple of chapters.
also, mc is a pretty sweet dude. lily is the cutest.