hello jello's Manga

on16
the art is good. but the plot is awful. they start us off with cool, sweet older brother and naive, kind mc. they're cute, sure. but the random uncle rebellion? the evil spirit? but no world building. are spirits normal? who is the ruler, what is the power struggle? magicians? we're just thrown into this world, but no power-scaling or whatnot is explained.
-also the brothers got out of the battle? i was thinking this was a dream the whole time, but it's been going on for too many chapters and too detailed with new characters for a child to dream up.
-honestly, this is a pretty bad story, the only thing compelling about it is that i want the brothers to survive and live happily.

on34
not bad, the mc is interesting. but yeah too many female characters who are either ditzy, annoying, or have big boobies. or all of the above. the lack of creativity and depth with the characters is crazy. but the plot kinda makes up for it?

on75

very good. going back in time is explained, the mc is super likeable. i actually don't blame the dad, he's honestly trying his best and doing what he thinks is right. the mls are both super cute and sweet.
the only flaw with this story is that everyone is nice except for the fake daughter. like how is everyone so kind and easy to manipulate.

on7

looks promising. the art is messy-style. i don't like mc? he needs to be careful but he's really careless. not by accident either.

on

honestly the art hurts my eyes. the cover is a lie. plot-wise it's new and interesting. i personally am just not a fan of artifacts and history enough to stay interested.
also, what happened to mc's dad?? rather than tension and climax, it was just confusion.

16

very good and interesting premise. the mc solves everyone's problems. but i want to know all the hardships he faced in his past life, and what he was doing before he worked here.