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read this in one sitting and the only thing i got out of it was that shiina was such a horribly portrayed character. i understand the concept of character the author was trying to go with her, but all her reasons on why she longed for death fell flat against the other characters. kaeda should have been the main focus, maybe then it would save this dog shit fest of edgy nonsense. like how come EVERYONE had a decent reasons to be a weirdo but shiino.