I like it but it’s missing something.... I think it was a mistake to write the love rival’s point of view. People root for the main pairing less when we sympathize for the loser so to speak. Comments are enough proof. We don’t get to see much of the younger guy except for that scene where see him study hard for the sake of talking with the master. And that’s actually a really cute trait. It’s a pity we don’t get to see him shine. He was overshadowed.
Well now, turns out they both work in the sex industry! Cute but simple read. Made me laugh a couple of times but overall heartwarming.
? There usually isn't spoilers lol. I almost never run across spoilers because people use the spoiler tag. Any website or comment section or app or literally anything that you go on to find info about a book/T.V. show will give you a spoiler warning before they give out vital info so that they don't ruin the book for you. I mean???
no dude its definitely still a spoiler. Definition of spoiler "a description of an important plot development in a television show, film, or book which if previously known may reduce surprise or suspense for a first-time viewer or reader." Thats any first time viewer over any length of time. Its common courtesy when giving a review to give a warning for spoilers. Im struggling to see what you all don't understand. Look up summaries/reviews for just about any movie or TV show. There will always be a spoiler notice before they give out information that alters the progression of the plot. The fact that they were both in that industry was an important plot point that was meant to be discovered later on in the story.
I didn't read the comments before the story. Idk why yall think I find this to be a personal offense. Im speakikg for people who like reading reviews before they read books or watch movies. Plenty of people do it without ever getting a spoiler. Its the equivalent of not covering your mouth when you cough. It's common courtesy, no you dont have to do it, and its not going to affect me if you dont, but as a decent fucking person imma tell you that its inconsiderate because it just kinda Is. goddamn how in the hell is this difficult to understand.
Actually, I'd imagine a decent person would when they try and explain 5 times why this is inconsiderate in a calm manner only to be met with being mocked, and then questioned on a topic that is common sense, and then told that reading a spoiler is the fault of someone who is reading reviews. Also look up the definition of personally mate, because I know my words and I sure af didn't take this personally.
I feel like I've stepped into the matrix or something. Do you all just go about your lives not knowing terms or word definitions? Clearly not only do you all not know what a spoiler is (or at least reject the idea of it) but now two different people don't know what it means to take something personally? I... i think I'll have to tap out of whatever is going on here because I legitimately don't understand it and its making me lose faith on what I thought was normalized information. Hopefully y'all think twice about posting spoilers but I'm not gonna hold my breath. Have a good day
A story that doesn’t demonize open sex/casual orgies. It’s actually very fluffy and the two main characters became an exclusive couple. I recommend it if you’re open to the fact that sex isn’t just for the one you love. Their body, they can do whatever they want. That doesn’t make them any less of a person. Skip if you’re not comfortable.
This person draws really well but when it comes to writing... eh.