Shen Miao 90 want to read (All 1900)
beta
The whole thing was in shambles. Somethings didn't make sense. In parts it was like they where trying to go down this path that looked interesting. But all of a sudden they deviate from it like it was "ups I had to take a turn in this corner" and then, just changed everything in the middle. Quite rushed the ending. And a lot of things where left unexplained, or at least it didn't make sense in my head.
1. The man (don't know his name) tried to blackmail MC when he saw them kissing, then it was forgotten JUST LIKE THAT and mentioned on a fleeting scene with no more substance that to explain quite absurdly the reason he did that in the first place. Like author wasn't happy with that and just, forgot about it and tried to make scumbag look good (for what u may ask? We'll never know)
2. Why his ex boyfriend would come up just like that dating the director? Really never knew.
3. WHY is there a twin sibling that doesn't apart ANYTHING to the story only confusing angst and shit? (I do have my theory on this one, something author-nim tried to make the brother the boy mc was in love in high-school but at then they couldn't continue with that plot for some reason and turn it to some kind of goofy brother that doesn't ADD anything substantial to the work.
4. Why the fuck can't they talk, communication is hot af.
This work just pissed me off big deal.
IT WAS FUN TO READ THO! So it wasn't THAT bad. I guess just wholes in the plot ruined this for me.
1. Boring. yet ANOTHER bl, where mc is infatuated with ML that is a piece of shit to mc at first.
2. I was really into the art, all character good drawn except for the MC why is he drawn like a 12 yo? Isnt he suposed to be in his 30? Its so fuking disgusting. I cant seem to swallow this one. i tried, but this was so off-putting.
Can even read first sex chapter.
ML was SO beautifully drawn that I just like him a lot, i wanted to still read this, just por this, BUT I CANT. Mc body is so awkward.
Right.. It was so funny at first. The plot could've been great too if they balanced the personal relationships and their dreams better. But it stuck to so many awful bl cliches and dumb character designs. Once again another story ruined by dumb cliches.