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well that was quite uncomfortable to read

i feel like this has a lot of plot holes,,,and passes because it has good art :( firstly, julian seems way toooo obsessed with his brother's life. like, yeah i get it you care for him, but stop making decisions for him, or trying to help him when he didn't ask you. secondly, i feel like both karel and sasya suffers from their own psychological disorders, and uh idk of help was available in the timeline the plot takes place. their emotions and communications are very much one-sided, both for karel and for sasya. karel loves him in his own obsessive way, and sasya... honestly idk what he truly feels. i do not get his motive for sleeping with the nobleman after running away from home. he tells mr. skar (karel) later that he didn't need money or status, so,,,, why was he sleeping with b the old nobleman who was literally raping him inna way? his depression seems much more severe than it's portrayed here and it makes things more difficult to understand the plot. this way, it's easier to blame sasya for leaving him then seeking him again, but if his depression was talked about in the story, if this issue was dealt with seriously rather than just mention it as a passing reference, then sasya's character would've made more sense. sasya seems to have abandonment issues, and trauma from the past, but it's treated so....idk....languidly... that i was honestly disappointed. both of them, or in that sense, no one in the story, seem to be rounded characters, all of them seem to be very one dimensional. sometimes julian is doing this or that, karel is angry sometimes, sometimes he loves and like they're all very extreme emotions. and like, human emotions are much more complex than that. i believe the author had something complex in mind in terms of expressing their conflicting emotions, but it's portrayed very very loosely. which, makes the story lose its natural flavour. this really had so much potential because it was beginning to talk about some serious issues, but then, it became such a cliche plot, (im not saying i don't like them), but it's a dragging read when the characters don't even know what they're doing.

i come back after like months, just to see if the plot has developed, apart from all those disgusting r@p3 scenes, but im ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYA SO DISAPPOINTED AND ANGRY it's just shit ton of chapters with r@p3 i just want the mc to be finally happy to finally stand up, finally run away, away far away from these, this filth, these animals, away from everyone, even from the one he loves, just for himself, living for himself and im ALWAYS, so fucking disappointed.

bro that's my normal chip grab wdym

omfg this author weaves the plot so slowly and sweetly it's beautiful to read every chapter. and the wait for the next one is such a pleasant experience, im somehow not impatient at all :") i literally cried the panel it said, "father, i forgive you." this is perhaps my most comfortable, warm read (if that makes sense) <3

this could've been like suzuhara was framed and all, and like a real plotline yk because the art is so beautiful,,,, but the end felt so weirdly rushed without any resolution hhhh this could've been so much better with actual character development but no（/TДT)/

im so sorry but i don't think i'll be able to upload this anymore :(( schoolwork is piling up and scantalating is taking too much of my time ( ￣□￣) im really really sorry :( if anyone wanna take over and pick this up, please feel free to do so. again im really really sorry ㅠㅠ

hello soooo umm ch 12 has a LOT of sfx and watermarks so it'll take a while please wait i guess till i clean and typeset it

soo umm uuuhhh there were a lot of sfx and indeed i may have messed up but my spine broke also, constructive criticism is very much welcome

okay so before someone says smth, PLEASE SEARCH UP YOUR INFORMATION. fujomelon has NOT been stealing anything. if y'all so desperate to call someone a stealer or smth then please, the previous uploader(s) literally stole the scans from an fb scan team (even after that fb team clearly mentioned that they do no allow anyone to post their scans here). so fujomelon has actually picked this up because it was 'stolen' and replaced ch 6 with THEIR own scantalated version. like y'all literally hating on them for no reason at all, when they're ones trying to stop the prev uploaded from stealing. and yes, i noticed that the panels are a bit messed up, but you can put it nicely like constructive criticism??? hello??? if you have any problem wth the language just say it nicely what's so hard abt it? it makes me so mad that people are blaming fujomelon for some wrongly collected information. and ive seen the raws and trust me, fujomelon has done a great job in cleaning and translating. so please, before talking, search up what you're talking about.