
I feel a bit bad for Kiryuu because he stands absolutely no chance. Every move from Nagisa makes her react while no matter what Kiryuu does she still only see Nagisa in the end.
I simply hope it won't turn ugly or make the friendship between the boys complicated.
(he better not force a kiss on her tho !)

What a pathetic piece of shit ! Wow of course go on blaming everyone else for YOUR mistake simply because you're useless lowlife.
Stealing, being awfully bad at betting, hitting a woman, using her, then injure 2 teenagers ... I hope the guys you borrowed money from catch you and torture you.
I feel bad for the woman because she'll have that tattoo for the rest of her life and will forever be reminded of him. That's why you NEVER tattoo your body for someone else (well I wouldn't put their names or anything personal either)
I also feel bad about Niwa's uncle, he was happy to see his nephew (and Kiriya) work with him and have an honest life and yet his nephew will end up following Kiriya into the yakuza.

They're so cute ! I wish there was more though. And I loved how they weren't all cheesy and how she dealt with her feeling, she was quite mature !
Also I loved how she laughed at the line "As long as I lived" and called it exaggerated but still wanted to try believing it, it was less cringy that all those kids taking that line seriously.

I don't see what's wrong with the art, maybe you're simply not used to read webtoons, especially from non professional artist, I like it, the chibis are adorable and colors well done.
(I have to admit I hate the hairstyle for the white haired guy for his modeling)
Anyway, it looks promising so far, and I'm glad he didn't take advantage of him while he was sleeping, it's getting rare in bl lately.
Haha I was also thinking about the fact that it's the first time the author had both characters without glasses, glad she talked about it.