The second couple seme should've been the uke. It would've been fine if he had a bigger dick but the uke dick was bigger. I get that a dude with a smaller sausage can be the seme but uke in the second couple wasted that lovely thic sausage. They should've at least switched every once in a while. And honestly, the seme looked like he was supposed to be the uke. He really just wanted to top dude so he can feel like a man.
This is my second time reading this. The first time I liked it but the second it wasn't what it seemed. I know that sex scenes are not really important but I felt like we saw more of other people having sex than the main couple and that ties in to what I'm going to say next. We barely got to see the main couple at all in the present. The story was basically 99% flashbacks and memories. Yea I want to see their back story but don't make it the whole story. The side couples had more screen time than the main couple. It was really frustrating to just be reading all these flashbacks and then all of a sudden the main couple is back together and pushed to the side. I honestly didn't care for the side couples because I was still trying to figure out the main couple. I believe there shouldn't have been any side stories about the other couples but something about the main couple because we barely got to see them together. Sorry this was so long.
That's a MAN right there!