This webtoon has massive plotholes!
Janica summoned the highest ranked sprit of darkness, Glaskan and caused destruction in the school so every students should run in chaos while trying to survive and the professor/teachers should to take precautions to prevent any students from getting into any further danger...and yet from ch-8 to ch-11 they literally erased every people's existence except for the main character and side characters. It's funny the mc and his friends are trying to save everyone despite being first year students and yet the older students are nowhere to be seen...I wonder, are there not any strong students among the older students?
Taylor should be an important character for being the previous mc and yet there's no depth to him. He won against Lucy in the game mc played in his previous life but when mc reincarnated, Taylor loses against her for no apparent reasons. Taylor also doesn't learn elemental slash but defeats glaskan's right hand man just because his swordsman form manifested itself?(Is it something like enlightenment? idk it feels like a plot armour since it happened out of nowhere). Can I just say his characterization felt so abrupt?
Also all of the girls have such predictable/cliche personalities. They always seem to stalk the mc or take interest on the mc just because he acts unlike himself and even destroy his home(only Lucy did this tho lol). No background information about what the mc(ed's) life used to be like, just the fact their family is evil. No mystery, literally every early pages are about random girls popping up in mc's wooden hut
Exactly, that's why I'm very confused about the plot. Either they are rushing the story in the manhwa, or it just happen to have plot holes
Maybe because Ed was inside a game / novel? The original game / novel is probably where the loopholes are. Taylor maybe have that "protagonist" shield for him that make him can clear any obstacle as he supposed to do, if a tiny bit detail was off during the scenario, he probably will earn some "lucky" thing for him to clear it and survive. Because what I noticed is that these loopholes can only be found around Taylor (the original protagonist) not Ed?
I remember reading this webtoon in 2018/2019 before. I also remember feeling really annoyed by how the first couple treated Seunghee as a scapegoat/therapist and dragged him into their drama. I hated how Kyubin and Seungtaek didn't even bother to check up upon everything they put seunghee through. I felt so sad for him and was wishing for his happiness. He may be a bit rude, abrasive and closed off but he doesn't deserve to constantly get dragged into other people's problems. He deserved a break from all this mess tbh. At one point, I felt like he was a bit attention-starved when he was feeling affection towards the older guy and was trying to relate to him. He was just wishing someone would love him for who he is after being treated like that by his own dad and the main couple. I really loved Suhyeok and Seunghee's story, I really loved the slow-burn and lovey-doveyness part of it.
Oh I also remember skipping all the scenes with the first couples (I just couldn't like them after what they did to the mc lol, Ik I'm petty). When I put myself in the mc's shoes, I don't think I can forgive them for how they treated me so easily. i hated how the main couple messed with him in the beginning...I really loved Seunghee, Suhyeok and Inbeom as characters. I found Inbeom annoying at the start but he grew out on me by the end of this webtoon because he was such a realistically written character. He had a lot going on and I also guess everyone deserves a second chance...
That aside I don't remember much about this webtoon anymore and I'm not gonna re-read it because I remember feeling stressed out when I read it before...
That Daewoo is so damn frustrating and irritating! Spreading rumors yet faking his kindness to make himself look great in front of Taeyang and thinking of using Taeyang as a toy for his own enjoyment, he is such a creep to steal Taeyang's phone number and coming to his house(How did he even know where Taeyang lives again?) without even asking him...he is basically stalking and obsessing over him 24/7. Hope to see him get what's coming for him soon...
then he goes out of his way to rape the blonde idiot
Ah this is kinda good, I'm so curious about what's going to happen...If updating sooner is not possible then I'll wait but please update!
Ahhh that felt good but I wish I could've seen a more hopeless look on Fabian's face. He should feel extreme guilt for what he has done. Typical webtoon or manga try to justify what the domineering seme has done only because they have a pitiful/sad/horrible past. This one is a nice break from all those reoccurring plots...
Also I felt really bad about the brother, he looked so caring and kind(I really liked it when he gave his brother the scarf with a fierce face)...to go to jail when he has done nothing wrong and lose his brother like that...I feel so bad...
I'm really going to drop this manga if they kiss. Idk why are they trying so hard to force the incest between them. I also hate how the manga's trying so hard to normalize the kiss between them. They can just use a stand-in for the kissing scene but no they WoN't. I also don't like how the characters are so normal about this. This scene is just another excuse for the author to put incest bait. ONK was so good at the beginning but the plot feels so messy now. Imo sometimes it feels like the author is just writing anything to make it work. It's really not as good as it was before...
lmaoo time to drop it then, they kiss twice (￣∇￣")
It was more or less predictable ig :)...I'll gladly drop it. Thanks for informing me! ^^