Erys already read

On his way home after an evening out drinking, Shiratori Tomoe meets a roughed up man named Zen. He ...

  • Author: Sai Naoe
  • Genres: Yaoi
Erys created a topic of To deny the route

I feel like there’s missing information and as well as in general it feels like there’s things that are missing.
Like at the start, his reactions, and the way that he went about things just feels a little bit unnatural like the grasp for information wasn’t really there that you would have in that situation . he feels a little bit like a Marionette.

But I didn’t really finish up to the part that everybody is at now wanna come to reading I stopped. Because of this I’m not that far off though from where everybody is.

He a character that like he’s right above water very non-interesting in certain ways like he’s not trying to do anything it’s weird the way that he eats his follows without question without thought if you think about it and

that he feels like he just possessing that body and (even if he is) and not that he possibly just remembered his past life that he doesn’t question himself or that he’s so unattached from all the other characters like his siblings, his parents, even the potential targets. he doesn’t see them like the they are now his family they’re not just this person in this person. They are now his family they see him like that. They will cry for him. He doesn’t see the severity of everything. I don’t think he properly gets it. I know that the siblings can be annoying, but still the fact that he feels so accomplished when he lies to them. Even if to spare their feelings it’s weird.

His actions feels like he’s an adult and other times he’s a child and other times he doesn’t realize that he’s a child it’s very weird weird and he feels like I said before a puppet it’s strange maybe it’s just me, but the author makes me feel like they don’t know how to properly write a BL guy in this specific situation. It’s just not hitting right.
He doesn’t act like a guy. But this is just my opinion. I just wanted to share it but don’t get mad if you think it’s amazing or whatever because it is good it’s just missing something.

So I kept reading out of curiosity. And there’s a couple reasons why I will not be coming back to this.

There’s the a couple of reasons like the fact that it kind of started dragging at one point I wanted to be done with it and it wasn’t even like oh let’s take a break type of situation, i won’t say it’s because it a Chinese BL I think and they don’t do spicy scenes justice in my opinion, or like it all but I don’t know why they’re added when they are like this it feels like it needs it to make everything more cohesive but it’s not even just like frustrating it’s annoying drags out the story weirdly and I don’t like that not saying that they all need it. It’s just that some do

My second biggest is the unsatisfaction of the fact that he was basically forced the betrayal of how it happened and it wasn’t consensual I didn’t like that. It felt not just unsatisfactory. It felt wrong not like something you could’ve fix

Now, for like my biggest fucking reason the age gap the HR is shit. He knew him when he was a child right now he’s 17 and he’s 28 it’s gross and uncomfortable. The only thing that could possibly make it a little bit better not a lot because the black guardian would still seen him as a child and acted that way and kind of had feelings for him so just a little bit make it better if he was also reincarnated in or another that would’ve made it better even a fractionally because the age gap keeps putting me off it’s very uncomfortable even if he’s the bottom it is it’s still no

Erys created a topic of You Who Wants to Love

Besides the extreme issue that I have with their ages and everything and with the circumstances what the fuck is with his head and some of those panels it’s so fucking ugly it’s hilarious but yeah, I’m probably not gonna be reading this anymore. This is my limit.

Erys already read

...

  • Author: Akai shirafu
  • Genres: Yaoi / Smut / Romance / School Life
Erys already read

Ryuusei is tasked to be the star in a prank video in an attempt to go viral. His objective? Confess ...

  • Author: Akai shirafu
  • Genres: Yaoi / Comedy / Romance

I like the slow and mellow type of progression, and when I mean progression is like it felt so seamless between that not understanding to complications to falling in love, but not really complicating it because one of them doesn’t really care the other ones assuming but assuming to the point that it took him so long that the other one is not realizing that he’s also in love I really like the progression I really like how it forms together. Some people might say it’s boring but I just feel like maybe they need to read something with more adrenaline because to be realistic. This is very interesting and this is really good. It’s very nice I just feel like you have to begin specific mood And this was perfect

Erys created a topic of Peach Boy (Yooyoung)

I have come to the conclusion that this gave me the scent of a proper could be good story and now I’m pissed off like clearly a little crazy maybe a lot very very magical very very supposed to be elusive maybe supposed to be a little bit like a fever dream but then it gives you absolutely fucking nothing you digest nothing it’s like if it gives you the illusion that you have a fucking hamburger in your hand like it’s building it for you and when you’re freaking about to eat it, you can taste it in your mouth you can taste it should be something there when you swallow it you digest nothing so I’m pissed the fuck off because I felt like I got nothing. I will come back to the story later just because I wanna see if they do something with only one fucking thing one thing the timeline it’s giving you it’s not even concrete it’s all over the fucking place , we started this specifically when he went into that world that is supposed to be like a sunken in between a bunch of countries countries before that he was in like black market type areas for the very rich, wealthy and very depressed people because that’s what it was giving me and people don’t exactly believe in magic, but superstition, because there is a real world, and there is the one that he went through after he went through that fucking gate, right it’s also trying to use a lot of mythologies in China Japan, Korean some Thai. I saw some there too I think because of that it’s giving you all that you digest. Nothing that it gives you you feel like you should be having a big ass weight in your hands for the same amount that it gave you but then it gives nothing and at first I was thinking all this just gonna be a straight up porn , it’s not even that I’m angry

Erys created a topic of Remarried Empress

OK I will say I feel very sad and pity for the younger version of her because I don’t believe a child ever deserves that unless they’re psychotic from birth and I don’t think she was and I’m sad for the things that that child went through but the older version of her, I do pity her to be realistic it’s more disinterested than hatred. She doesn’t deserve what she had because she stole it and she didn’t steal it win fashion. She didn’t win she Gimik herself and cheated through everything. She doesn’t wanna be happy. She covers what other people have without trying to find proper happiness so of course she’s never gonna find it , I pity her for being such a disgusting adult

Erys already read

...

  • Author: Hakase
  • Genres: Yaoi / Smut / Comedy / Romance / School Life / Slice of Life / Supernatural Comedy Romance School Life Slice of Life Supernatural
Erys created a topic of Instant Family

Let’s calm down a little bit and be rational regardless of him being there or not this would’ve happened most likely worse maybe later or not as soon but he was just a child and he was being used. Can’t expect that much from a freaking 12 year old actually it’s most likely because of abuse that he had that he didn’t think oh maybe I should tell them what’s happening That would’ve been the best conclusion that he could’ve done but with all the things that have happened to him I doubt that that would’ve been you know irrational mentality he was 12

I was kind of hoping it would have a little bit more martial arts that when it came to her, she just has the basic side power that every other usual fl story has where it’s actually fighting it’s not actual proper martial arts. It’s more like you can help an aid others because you have a special power in your eyes and it’s a defensive power and not an offensive. If you get my draft I don’t know if I’m doing that backwards but still, it’s a little lackluster. I was hoping that she would find miraculous way to do it probably because I’ve read too many battles Shannon, but I was hoping that would be a nice mix of something like that but maybe a little bit more so dude not like this it seems like it I still like it it’s just not as much and then somebody else is saying who the ML is and I don’t like that person either

Erys already read

At the Engetsuza Shrine, there's a magical tale that’s been passed down through each gene...

  • Author: Himaki ito
  • Genres: Yaoi / Romance
Erys already read

There's a red thread tied to my finger, and at the other end is... the yankee who sits next to ...

  • Author: igari peko
  • Genres: Romance / Comedy / Shounen Ai / School Life
Erys created a topic of Tanaka Family Reincarnates

Bro, I forgot how much I enjoyed this but I will say I feel like in somewhere or another. Her family should end up with the title of Marquez one higher than the station that they already have. I think it in the end it will be more beneficial than anything else for them I hope they’re like I don’t know. Kind of forced to take it. I think it would make their lives a lot easier than they think it will. I think they didn’t think it through properly when they declined

Erys already read

...

  • Author: Hijiki
  • Genres: Yaoi / Delinquents / Romance Delinquents Romance
Erys already read

A cocky and confident Yajima harbors dislike for Torikai, a cool and talented fellow trainee in the ...

  • Author: Ohshima Kamome
  • Genres: Yaoi
Erys already read

5 years ago, high-schooler Tomoya faked his age and tried to get laid at a gay bar. While the attemp...

  • Author: Ohshima kamome
  • Genres: Yaoi / Romance
Erys already read

In a world where humans and human-like beasts coexist, Yukari comes across an unconscious Shima in t...

  • Author: Nanatsuno Wataru
  • Genres: Drama / Smut / Yaoi

I didn’t even get through all of chapter one and I could feel it. I could smell it I could sense it taste it. It was not that good when it comes to plot the freaking art is beautiful but there’s no goddamn way he runs a brothel, literally deals and human trafficking, he buys people I don’t give a shit how good you think that guy is he’s just not it like I’m not here to porn so porn is like less than a chapter usually like absolutely Fuck I run a lot of fucked up shit but I can’t know thank you this looks a little too cohesive when it’s not like insane it becomes a little too real

Erys already read

The story of a bird tengu with a soft spot for Kuro, a black dog he picked up one rainy day. But Kur...

  • Author: hayashi maki
  • Genres: Smut / Yaoi / Supernatural