beta
Sigh, this story was way shallower than I hoped it would be. Everything is just there to lead to a sex scene. Communication? Completely sexual. The whole conflicts are "resolved" through the monologues in one's head during sex. The story is becoming shallower and shallower by each chapter that I am fairly sure we all end up in a desert of a brainless smut (if we are not already). This was my limit, dropping off. May the strongest of all see this "story" to the end.