This is fine. There are definitely some cliches but the story itself is nice enough.
Ok so I’m pretty sure most of us dislike the ‘breathing trash’. I’m just gonna say my piece on why I’m okay with calling him that. I wouldn’t be half as mad if he hadn’t known what it was gonna be like for her at Astra’s (the extremely mean blonde haired lady in the beginning) home. He knew going into it that Bella would be continuously beaten. I just can’t forgive him for that. It wasn’t even for something like her own protection. It was because he didn’t want to fall in love with her and not get revenge. If that not trashy, I’m not sure what is. Ugh. I don’t wanna forgive him at all. I’m totally rooting for Eden. I’ll read the story to completion because I feel like I owe it to Bella to see her in a happy ending. But I do hope she doesn’t end up with the mean guy.
How much y’all wanna bet that he’s Mr. Mouchen?
you mean hell lord?
Haha. That’d be funny too. I was talking about the teacher who the broth was intended for.
lol, sorry. I guess I don't understand your question.
Sorry I confused you (=・ω・=)
Thank you to all the wonderful people who put there time into this! It’s turning out so amazing and I’m absolutely LOVING it! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
Tbh, that guy was kinda cute lol. I feel bad for him and I hope we can see him again. He made me laugh (⌒▽⌒)
I really enjoy it! I normally get a Hawaiian pizza but replace the ham with pepperoni. It’s delicious, but I like most pizza anyway
Does anyone know when the emperor will fully remember her and then get along with her again?!
on her 15th birthday, lucas will will hit the head of claude
Thank you so much ╥﹏╥(≧∀≦)
no probs(⌒▽⌒)
Now that is a strong woman. She was able to make those girls see their fault and had them reflect on it. That is strength. And the way those girls were finally able to realize what they did was marvelous thought out. From the words to images, it was wonderful.
I’m just gonna go ahead and pretend the ages are whatever ages I feel fine with. Just a story anyways.
Same omg
Yeah me to. Also if you remember woman of the tip of decade the trying to represent in this book she would be close to being an old Spencer. Woman back then got married vary young.