I just looked at this one and the other one back to back and I like this translation more
Every time I read this I want to beat Gin off with a stick, give him a good kick to the leg (or sensitive area) for enjoying Hijikata's suffering, and protect Hijikata, get him out of there. He doesn't deserve to be treated like that. And it's hard seeing him mentally decline like that, but f*ck Harada's good
Rip Sungtae