This was cute, so it's too bad it stops at only 10 chapters. Also, starting at ch 7 the translations are not as good.
Noice! I love the fact that they'll be getting on the road now and we'll get to see them in a different location!
This might be the one and only instance where I think the amateur group did a better translation than the official version (well, aside from Slow Damage). So yeah, I've been reading Mosh Scan's version and think it's better written.
"But will the people, who covet the power of heaven people, let them remain hidden there" - One of several equally appalling sentences. Idk if it's the translation or the actual writing, but one of those things is not good. Which is too bad because the art is beautiful. I'mma keep reading in the hopes that these weird sentences will become less common as the story progresses, but so far I'm a bit disappointed.
If she's the monarch, why does she have to convince the nobles of anything? Can't she just give Kalid a title and region regardless?
Ugh, I waited so long for a new chapter... but, I wasn’t really a fan of this one. I don't mind incest, but mother/son is just too deranged and grosses me out.
That was lucky. I was thinking he would still die, but wouldn't go back to the very beginning. Since Youngwon said he had never gotten this far before, I figured they passed some type of save point. But it makes more sense that Hohyun is the key to everything. Though, I would have liked to see them going back in time at least once.
What is with these names lol - "Pain Overlord" XD that's just way too on the nose and super corny. Since it's originally Korean, I can forgive some of the dumb names. But if this was American I'd probably stop reading.
Fuck that. I would've stayed at the palace with the prince instead of going with Myungin's crazy ass. He's hot, but he's a total dick - no thank you.
Too much sex, not enough plot, which is a shame because the plot is really interesting.
Wait, so is Doha an NPC or not? Also, since they mentioned being trapped I'm wondering if this is a regular video game or something more sinister. Could this be a Roy situation where they're dealing with super advanced tech, so when they finish the game only a few minutes will have passed? Or is it a Jumanji situation where they were brought into the game against their will?
Also, Yong-Taek is an NPC, right? Has that been confirmed?
Goddamn, every single chapter ends on such a huge cliffhanger! I knew I should've given it a few weeks to wait for more chapters, but I couldn't help myself >_> That aside, I'm happy to have gotten an explanation about the tapes, because I was wondering how the save data worked with the maps.
Fuck, I just caught up on the last three chapters... and goddamn, I really wasn't expecting that.
Alternate title - "Snow White Fucks Three Retards."
Seriously, wtf? And what was wrong with their dicks? Even though they were blurred I can tell the color was so weird. I think this could have been a good story if the art was better, and if the dwarfs weren't literally retarded, and if the writing was better (it sounded like it was taken from a fanfic written by a twelve year old, and I'm mainly saying that because it sounds like something the 12 year old version of me would have written... god I was a messed up kid).
That was so ridiculous judging from the comments I thought it'd be way worse than it actually was. Also, jeez, every character was a complete psychopath, especially the chick.
