beta
Ok it was really good but is it me or was it quite rushed ?? Like they kinda just accepted the feelings so easily and immediately caught the bad guys. Like it did start to get repetitive with the perfumes but I found them each quite interesting and I like how they are all different but man like it all got solved in like 20 chapters?? Also 2nd ml it would be nice to pair to with the old fl or something they also just brushed him past with like no apology from Cedric for nearly killing him like ?? I wish we got more expansion on Cedric courting Ariel and 2nd ml starting to accept and over come his feelings from Ariel