Started reading this but everything felt off anr confusing. Stopped at chapter 20.
Chapters were going by too quick with no to zero development, Hajin started liking Dokyung out of fucking nowhere, that white haired guy just popped up randomly with no explanation, the red haired guy was easily told off by Hajin with only two encounters, and everything was incredibly unexplained. I've been reading comments that it gets worse, the art gets sloppier and the story messier, so I'm dropping this. I can easily tell that the author had no idea how to start the story nor how to keep going with it.
Thank you so much for the update! But you posted the same chapter twice (Chapter 58 and 59) ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭