edit: this was pure cringe and I couldn’t help screaming at the mc for all the shit decisions he made honestly I was surprised when I read the comments and people actually liked this. too bad the story sucks the art style is nice and this could be a way better story like if the mc wanted to get close to his crush why didn’t he just try to talk to him but you wanna have sex with him with your professor like wth and the professor is also shit like wth are u doing with two students like it’s disgusting. The story line is so bad that I can’t seem to tell where this entire story is going like I don’t want the Mc to be with either of them none of these characters are in The least likeable maybe except the mc’s friend. Honestly, the professor is super skeptic like did he leave the door open knowing that someone was coming back for the hard drive or did he know it was the Mc because he watched him leave it there and thought oh he’ll definitely come back for it so I’ll leave the door open and make him witness his crush doing this and that I honestly just son’s understand probably won’t come back to read this and I’m surprised how many people upvoted this tbh thought I would get so much hate haha
I gotta say I don’t really like Simon or owen but obviously Owen is the better choice Simon is obviously a manipulative bastard and always turns the situation on jordyn and I really liked Owen until he tried to rape jordyn yaoi or not it’s not okay and honestly jordyn needs to stand his ground you can’t just not confront people for their actions because they will do it again without hesitation ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
I’m not that displeased or upset with the ending but I feel like i didn’t really “enjoy” the story (legit forgot the blond hair guys name) boyfriend hyunjin wasn’t a very good person he seemed kinda toxic making mc feel bad for wanting to take care of sun woo (but then again i feel like sun woo took advantage of him telling him not to go but maybe its just me) I also feel like the mc and hyunjins love didn’t feel real like they barely went on any dates we never really got to see a lot about their relationship and then all of a sudden POW they get married. Honestly the story feels incomplete usually in stories i root for characters, laugh, make comments and etc but for this one I really felt nothing i cant really describe it but anyway yeah. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
I really like this story it just seems to me that there’s a lot of smut which is normal since it is listed as a smut but I feel like sometimes it’s unnecessary and there should be more plot I also feel like Souma is kind of a dick I understand he was probably tired from the fire incident but he could’ve at least gave ryo a call especially as it was her birthday and should’ve told those girls he had a girlfriend also about souma’s friends why did they make it seem like it was okay to cheat like why not tell ryo you need trust in a relationship and I’m glad souma did I think it could work on some things but overall it’s good and there’s some fluff (︶︿︶)=凸
He already knows what happened so why bother asking making someone speak up like that about a situation can scar them (speaking from experience) it just causes them to feel scared, and in Ho’s defence your basically just taking his feelings for granted but your trying to make yourself the victim in the situation ? How messed up can you be I bet your just trying to make Ho a boy toy for you to play with like Charlie (︶︿︶) I rest my case.
So I just started reading this and it’s good so far but I’m ust genuinely curious why authors will show boobs and stuff but not show dicks it’s not just because of this story but I always wondered also this story is amazing so far so I’m excited!
It’s often not the authors choice, but censorship is more strict for genitalia than the chest. Male anatomy is also often more censored then lady parts
Oh, o thank u very much!