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I love how involved Louie is with his kid. I've seen too many child raising BL where they treat their kid as competition for affection with their partner. Like, that's YOUR kid, they need affection from you too! Familial affection is different from Romantic affection, it doesn't need to be ranked!
louie has the right level of affection competition with his kid. "i love mommy more, but let me show you fun ways to troll mommy."
I think this story could've been better with proper pacing and some fight scenes here and there. It's only 10 chapters but can maybe be fully fleshed out in 30-40. It's like the author only drew the interesting bits but we have barely any context for those bits.