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There's 20 chapters of this? The "plot" is fine if there were only, say, six or seven chapters, but this going on and on? I'm only on chapter six and I'm wondering what's going to happen. Especially when multiple other comments are saying there's no real character development... Yeesh. It's fine. It's not the best yaoi I've ever read, but it's also FAR from the worst, having been reading the genre for over a decade. It's just kind of...there. It's nothing new and an overused trope that's not really expounded on by the author. The uke is a little bit TOO pitiful.