I love all the little details that show that Hari isn't "normal" (as in, she doesn't always react the way society deems normal), like how she climbs over a corpse to retrieve her shoe in one of the first chapters. They make the story much more unforgettable.
Also the three way wedding dream part? Girl I didn't know threesomes were my thing but now...
I don't even understand anything anymore, all the light-haired guys looks the same, everything is so wet I don't know what's what, they fuck everywhere all the time so I've no idea in what situation they are most of the time... What a mess...
Honestly I'm mad cause 99% of these stories end up with the girl not liking the good guy, but the toxic self destructive one. Hiiro and the FL don't deserve that.
I am really sorry because I'm grateful for the translation, but maybe because English isn't my first language, I didn't understand a single thing towards the end.
Hun the problem isn’t your English the problem is that the story doesn’t make sense at all#-.-) Yaoilover
Nope, the translation was the problem. The story itself was already too short thus underdeveloped, the bad translation made it empty,messy and meaningless.
I love all the little details that show that Hari isn't "normal" (as in, she doesn't always react the way society deems normal), like how she climbs over a corpse to retrieve her shoe in one of the first chapters. They make the story much more unforgettable.
Also the three way wedding dream part? Girl I didn't know threesomes were my thing but now...