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the story itself is good and interesting but omg bro! the romance part is just in ur face! ik they're just hs students & care about puppy love but holy shit nayoon is sooooo annoying. it's not even simply "i just don't like her" too! even tho hajin puts clear boundaries between them, she still finds a way to come into the story thru romance.
she's also the type of character who is brash, immature, and stubborn but for some reason is well-loved/popular among the opposite gender. it kind of reminds me of characters in media who like a girl because of stuff like "omg... ur so different from those frail, softspoken girls... i like u..." like bro even yeonha is a better choice! rachel is great too! why the hell is nayoon the focus?!
yeah love can happen thru any circumstance but do we need to see EVERY reaction she has regarding hajin?? like we get it, author. she likes him. ok.